Wednesday, July 25, 2018

Directorial Assignment Final Parts 1 and 2


Part 1
*no notes on casting, just find people that can fit the parts, would need to meet people directly

Play deals with heavy material, so make sure that cast understands that- possibly do some research with them[1]

Setting/Staging

·         Present time, all characters have smartphones

·         Stage split into two to allow for facilitation between scene changes

·         Black curtains as background, but no wall between the two separations

·         Three homes, Tim’s(T), Edward/Kitty’s(E/K), Jake/Rachel’s(J/R)

o   Left side of stage is Edward/Kitty’s house, change between kitchen and sitting room (might change depending on the ease at which the sets can be changed)

o   Right side is everything else, but most importantly, right side is court scenes

o   E/K has a bit of an unlived in look

§  Sitting Room

·         At beginning: used sofa, with boxes on and around it

·         Middle: boxes are gone, sofa still looks used, and the room is very sparse

·         End: same as the beginning with a dust sheet over the couch

§  Kitchen

·         A table in the middle with a checkered tablecloth, four chairs around it

o   No food on the table, everything is a bit dusty

o   Little dresser in the back, vase with dead flowers on it

o   Wine rack on the dresser, a few bottles missing

o   Door into the house is clearly in the kitchen

o   T looks old

§  Dust sheets cover everything

·         Rearrangement of the furniture from the first scene

o   J/K

§  Again, rearrangement of furniture from the first two house

§  More lived in than both T and E/K

·         Court/Café

o   Court very minimalistic

§  Single chair for witness and a podium for the prosecutor/defense

§  In background, table with the three magistrates

§  Defendant is unseen and audience is in position of the audience of the trial.

§  Stark and shown as uncaring or in some context terrifying, especially for Gayle

o   Café has three tables with some chairs

§  Only one table is occupied,

§  Drinks are set in front of the characters on the table, just see the edge of the door in the background

§  Characters can take sips while talking



Emphasis

·         Build the play around scene nine in act 1

o   Big tipping point, both sides of the stage, as court and home mix

o   Gayle is in front, but not center, approaches Edward and Tim, but not too close

§  Has a space around her, like a bubble to make sure she is not touching anyone

§  She looks a bit dirty, as though she has not showered in the last three days

·         Also draw comparison between scene 2, act 1 and scene 2, act 2

o   Different/similarities between Tim and Laura?

·         Gayle’s plotline is secondary, but almost echoes in the true plotline of the play

o   Make it clear how her panic and discomfort affect the couples

o   Evidence needs to be provided in the party scene particularly of her impending death

o   The echo needs to be clear throughout, not just how she affects the couples, but how certain things mirror her story (think when Kitty is talking to Laura and trying to get custody of Leo)

·         Focus on the crime of rape and how it is discussed within the court and domestic scenes as a juxtaposition

·         Bookends of the play with Gayle need to be clear in that the entire frame is based off of her experience and how the couples react to their understanding of what happened to her

o   Needs be clear that she is not a ghost in the sense of a real ghost, but leaves impressions, particularly emotional ones on the rest of the characters

·         Main plotline not quite as important as the impressions left on the audience

Costuming/Make-up

·         Changes depending on scene

·         Edward

o   Black or navy trousers with a button-up and a tie

o   Add vest and suit jacket as needed

o   Black gown and wig for court scenes

·         Tim

o   Same as Edward with glasses

o   Add vest, jacket and tie as needed

o   Black gown and wig for court scenes

·         Jake

o   Same as Edward but with no tie

o   Add vest, jacket, and tie as needed

·         Kitty

o   Pants and blouse, but no jacket

o   Frazzled, especially in the first scene

o   Wears flats

·         Zara

o   Flowery dress, heels, white sweater

o   Full make-up, but not overly crazy

o   Hair should be done, and styled

·         Rachel

o   Pant suit

o   Heels also, very high

·         Gayle/Laura

o   G: has a rougher look, blouse with a long skirt

§  Not dirty when in court, but has some dirt spots in other scenes

§  Long hair, somewhat bedraggled, pulled back

o   L: pencil or pants with nice blouse

§  Hair pulled back into a bun

§  Soft make-up, but professional

Actor staging

Act One, Scene One – left side

·         Scene should begin with less lighting, just enough to see by, with the setting described earlier

o   Gayle should walk out through the background curtains, light focused on her should increase, then fade to black as she leaves. She is here to reference the rest of the play hinging on aspects of her trial

o   Rest of actors come on, set in positions around the room, lights come back on

§  Party/house-warming atmosphere

§  Bottle of wine and glasses on a side table, with a nice tablecloth (to be used later)

§  Rachel and Edward are avoiding each other

Act One, Scene Two – right side

·         Gayle sitting in a plastic chair (possibly on a bench) playing with her hands or skirt

o   Pause when needed, after certain lines maybe – to be decided

o   Gayle can be getting frustrated, Tim is flustered

o   Gayle also frightened and confused in her frustration

Act One, Scene Three – left side

·         Again, a party atmosphere, laughing

o   Somewhat loud

o   Zara should be somewhat quiet, but speaking up louder and louder to be heard

o   Something should be starting to linger from the first trial scene

Act One, Scene Four- right side

·         Just Edward and Gayle for the scene where she is in the witness box

o   Light centered on the two of them, not much furniture

o   Gayle should be shaken, but standing up for herself, she is sitting, facing the audience

§  Not necessarily brave, but she wants people to know so that she can appeal to the empathy of the audience

Act One, Scene Five – left side

·         Jake is sniffling and sitting at the table, Edward and Kitty look confused

o   Clear that Edward is affected by his trial and takes Jake’s side as a consequence

Act One, Scene Six – right side

·         All have drinks in front of them, take sips periodically while talking

o   Seems to be going well between friends

o   Tim starts to get angry and there seems to be something between Zara and Edward

o   Their argument is a holdover from their argument in trial, though not focused around Gayle in this particular scene

Act One, Scene Seven – right side

·         Setting is dusty, and furniture is arranged to create a large area in the center

o   Tim and Kitty stand in the middle talking

§  Here the ghost section comes up, and can be made evident that it does not necessarily need to be haunted but that there is a different feeling to this house than the others, unless there is leftover emotion with Gayle

Act One, Scene Eight – left side

·         Kitty is stewing, she clearly is frustrated and possibly angry with Edward

o   Edward tosses the box on the table and sits down

Act One, Scene Nine – left side

·         Party scene again, Kitty and Edward avoid each other, Jake and Rachel are happy

o   When door rings Rachel walks to right side of stage, light on her and Gayle talking

o   When Gayle comes on stage she shoves past Rachel to enter

o   Light follows Gayle as she yells

o   Gayle is clearly dirty and her hair unwashed, she has tear tracks on her cheeks and starts drying at the end of the scene

§  THIS SCENE IS THE TURNING POINT

·         Second half focuses more on the problems that come from having the emotionality of Gayle permeate the lives of the couples, and less on her directly, but that sense from her plotline needs to resonate

Act Two, Scene One – left side

·         Edward acts aloof, but actually turns up frustrated during the discussion

Act Two, Scene Two – right side

·         Similar to Jake when he went to Kitty/Edward (Act One, Scene Five)

o   Edward crying

o   When sound comes up, it seems as though he is in the middle of explaining something,

Act Two, Scene Three – right side

·         Laura is the same person as Gayle

o   Acts kind, speaks straight forward

o   Edward is more of mess, but both Edward and Kitty get frustrated

§  Laura acts much the same way as Tim, does not take Kitty as seriously, mimics the earlier scene

Act Two, Scene Four – right side

·         Kitty and Edward are clearly angry with each other, and Jake has calming body language

o   When Tim appears, Edward gets visibly annoyed

o   Can be yelling

Act Two, Scene Five- left side

·         Zara and Kitty are both tense, same with Tim and Edward

Act Two, Scene Six – left side

·         Similar to first scene, but not with the party, just Edward and Kitty are there, so more like the beginning of the first scene

·         Folding of the sheet again, shows how the relationship has changed

o   At the end of the scene both are kneeling, not quite embracing, but not fighting either

·         Gayle appears again, showing how the trial affected the characters intensely

o   She does not interact with Kitty and Edward, but appears on the stage at the very end

o   The sense of overhanging fear and emotion that remains from the trial and the subsequent consequences

Sources

Trueman, Matt. “London Theater Review: 'Consent' by Nina Raine.” Variety, Variety, 8 Apr. 2017, variety.com/2017/legit/reviews/consent-review-nina-raine-1202026413/.

Baksi, Catherine. “Consent – A Play by Nina Raine.” Legal Hackette's Brief, 7 May 2017, legalhackette.com/2017/04/10/consent-a-play-by-nina-raine/.

A set of videos created by the National Theatre that introduced background, director ideas, and the actors for the first time the play was performed

 Part 2

Consent deals with heavy themes and everyone leaving the theatre will have some reaction to these themes. These themes include how crimes like rape and assault affect others indirectly and how someone who is a victim to one of these crimes might react when forced to relive what happened for a court. The difference in directorial vision comes from how this situation is dealt with and what parts of it should be in focus. The director of the version we saw had a different idea of the play than I came up with after reading the script, but their version worked under a different vision.

This director’s version of the play focused specifically on the relationship between Kitty and Ed. This might seem obvious, considering the script, but the scenes all tied into their relationship and seemed like secondary plot points that were not particularly necessary. The scenes with Gayle for example, showed a plot that was not symbolic or shaping of the play, but more of one that seemed almost disconnected. The other story lines were used as plot devices, or in an almost complimentary way to Edward and kitty’s relationship. This was plausible because of the way the script was written but did not provide the same impact another interpretation could have delivered. This is the exact opposite of what I wanted to do with Gayle’s storyline, emphasizing it as a parallel to the story of the various couples.

In addition, the director did not focus as much on the emotional disturbance of the couples and characters, which took away from Gayle’s scenes, because the panic and discomfort that come from her lines were not echoed by the actress. Clearly, she was still important as a device for initiating points in the main plot, but the lack of true emotion was odd. I wanted to make it clear that the scenes with Gayle were not merely a plot device to ensure that the other events of the play would happen, but that her scenes were integral to the feeling of the play. Thus, this director and I seemed to build the play on a difference of ideas regarding what was important.

In this respect I did not like the portrayal of Gayle in the version we saw. She wore a bright pink jacket, which added to a certain level of aloofness that appeared within her character. There were still sections of her scenes that held weight, but much of the court was distant, even when being discussed in the other character’s scenes. The attitude of the court scenes was almost clinical in a way and very stark. When Edward was cross examining there was no setting, just the him and Gayle standing with a spotlight on each of them. While I imagined that the set would be very simplistic and minimalistic I still had a different staging in mind for this particular scene. I would have rather had the two actors face the audience or at least cheat more towards the audience, specifically Gayle, who I wanted to be sitting down. However, this was not the only scene where I imagined a different setting/staging and the play ended up following a different tone than my version.

This director seemed to have the play built off of two, maybe three main scenes. The first of these scenes was the party where Gayle shows up. This might seem a bit late in the play, but the director showed that this was a turning point in the attitudes of the other characters. In this version, the scene felt weird given that there was no build up to the idea that something might happen with Gayle during the court scenes. The second scene of importance seemed to be the one where both Kitty and Edward are talking to Laura about getting custody of their child. This scene seemed important because both of them were on the stage and arguing with each other, even though they were in different places. This scene also brought all of the tension and problems in their relationship to a head, which was particularly significant in the version we saw, considering that the basis was looking at their relationship. In this there were some similarities between my version and the one we saw in that clearly the last scene of the first act, the one where Gayle comes to the party affected the characters strongly. I would have directed the scene slightly differently, but both had similar impacts on the mood of the play and the vision each the director and I had.

However, for a majority of the play, this director and I focused on very different things. This director seemed focused on the story line and how these characters were directly affected by the trail, while I was more focused on the emotional aspect, particularly for the audience, and less focused on the story. I wanted the entire play to be inundated with a sense of knowledge that the trial was wrong, and I wanted the audience to experience Gayle’s panic and discomfort. In order to do so I included a couple of sections that were in the script as stage directions, but that were left out of the version we saw. These involved Gayle appearing both at the beginning and the end of the play almost like a ghost. I believe that these were not included because of the focus of the play, but I think that much feeling was lost by not including them.

This play was effective in providing a somewhat believable storyline of Edward and Kitty’s relationship and how various issues affected it, but not as effective emotionally. I believe that my version would have affected the audience in a different way and provided an experience that was lost in this version. Since this play seems to deal in emotion, I believe that overall the version we saw was less effective because of the lack of feeling in the court scenes and distance between those scenes and the storyline being followed.



[1] Actual director did take the cast to some cases in order to better understand better what happens in the situations that are discussed in the play

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